Fan Fics

Aika

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Sun Feb 15, 2004 7:42:55 PM #5807 Perm Link

I just put my first fic up ^^ http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1736789&time=1077033778

Edited at Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:20:39 PM

wolfwoodavenger31

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Re: Fan Fic's

Mon Feb 16, 2004 2:17:39 PM #5819 Perm Link

In response to Trojin Relma Jennings #5785

Yes its good and so is your aika

Trojin Relma Jennings

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Mon Feb 16, 2004 4:25:54 PM #5828 Perm Link

Thanks Wolfwood ^_^ and don't you have any fanfics to show?

Im Mechant Gurl's Mechant Guy ehehheeh

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Tue Feb 17, 2004 12:51:43 AM #5842 Perm Link

In response to Trojin Relma Jennings #5828

You guys should read my Strifes and the Wallaces series. Good stuff, good stuff.

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Tue Feb 17, 2004 6:07:08 AM #5849 Perm Link

In response to JaegoLooLoo #5842

Well then let us read it.

~~~ANDREA A. SPARKSON~~~

Aika

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Re[2]: Fan Fic's

Tue Feb 17, 2004 10:14:22 AM #5851 Perm Link

In response to wolfwoodavenger31 #5819

Thanks ^^

Sinistra

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Tue Feb 17, 2004 1:50:00 PM #5854 Perm Link

In response to JaegoLooLoo #5842

Whats that? Is it FF7?

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Tue Feb 17, 2004 4:47:03 PM #5863 Perm Link

In response to Sinistra #5854

Eeeeeeeyup. I don't have a direct link, but it's on Fanfiction.net in the FinalFantasy7 section. Keep in mind, some are VERY OLD, so yeah. Also read Odditivity and what I have of Poo Llama (all in FF7).

My pen name is: Cloud Stryfe

wolfwoodavenger31

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Tue Feb 17, 2004 5:20:55 PM #5883 Perm Link

In response to Trojin Relma Jennings #5828

Sad to say but no

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Wed Feb 18, 2004 5:39:56 AM #5947 Perm Link

In response to JaegoLooLoo #5863

sure, Im going to go there in like two minutes

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Alexie Di Onie

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Thu Feb 19, 2004 9:23:24 AM #5999 Perm Link

just make sure you make them interesting.

I see now that the circumstances of one's birth is irrelevent. It is wat you do with the gift of life that makes you who you are.

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Thu Feb 19, 2004 10:23:10 AM #6004 Perm Link

In response to Alexie Di Onie #5999

Who're you directing that at?

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Thu Feb 19, 2004 3:33:16 PM #6012 Perm Link

In response to JaegoLooLoo #6004

I think he was directing that to you. But Im not sure.

~~~ANDREA A. SPARKSON~~~

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Thu Feb 19, 2004 4:39:29 PM #6015 Perm Link

In response to Kitty Cat Mew #6012

I certainly hope not, because if he was, it wouldn't make any sense.

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Thu Feb 19, 2004 6:54:35 PM #6019 Perm Link

In response to JaegoLooLoo #6015

Yea, but its not like he doesnt make any sense.

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Fri Feb 20, 2004 12:59:20 AM #6034 Perm Link

In response to Kitty Cat Mew #6019

Yes, it is like he doesn't make any sense. Baka gaijin Razz

Sinistra

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Re: Fan Fics

Sat Feb 21, 2004 3:26:19 PM #6153 Perm Link

In response to Trojin Relma Jennings #5785

I'm sorry but I couldn't finish your fic. I spent more of my time trying to figure out what the hell you were trying to say with your crappy spelling than what you were doing in the plot. Holy crap man!

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Sat Feb 21, 2004 3:45:58 PM #6154 Perm Link

hmm well it needs a lot of work . .you need more detail, and the characters are "out of character" . . .You need to learn how to spell tetsusaiga. (and your spelling could use some work as well) I dunno it has the potential to be a good story, but I really don't know where to start. I mean the plot is clear for those who have watched or read inuyasha, but for someone who has never heard of it, they would have no idea what you were talking about with the jewels, the demons, and everything else.

People with courage and character always seem sinister to the rest.

Pancakes

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Sat Feb 21, 2004 4:13:19 PM #6155 Perm Link

Being a writer, I despise everything about Fan Fics.
They are lazy attempts at writing a story using some one else's setting, characters, and at times, plot.
There is nothing remotely unique or interesting about any of them, because there was nothing remotely unique or interesting to begin with.
My advice; Take the time to create your own setting, to develop your own characters, and to create your own plot.

That being said, Trojin, do you know anything at <i>all</i> about writing?
I read the first chapter of your fan fiction, as painful as it was for me, and I've got to say that you definately need to pay more attention in English Class. Writing dialogue in interview style is neither correct nor 'cool'. The absence of quotes is also quite annoying.
When describing action, please DO NOT USE ACTION SYMBOLS. You are not role playing. You are writing. Well, you're trying to write, but what you're actually doing is raping a potential (albeit uncreative) story you could have had others read. Try to take the time to write paragraphs instead of lines, sentences instead of words, and letters instead of symbols. This should increase your writing skills by nearly 40%. Trust me, you need it.

Aika, I took a look at yours. I will first compliment you on your nod to grammar and spelling as it was quite a relief from the above story. But you seem to have the same problem as Trojin in writing one dialogue in interview style, using action symbols to describe actual actions. Although I did see a paragraph or two in there (WOO!). Some times your very descreptive with your setting, and some times you just allow it to chop from one place to the next. Try to keep an eye on this as you want your paper to flow nicely. You've got potential.

Jaego... I didn't look for yours. I will eventually though. So be ready.

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Sat Feb 21, 2004 6:01:15 PM #6157 Perm Link

In response to Pancakes #6155

Uh-oh! Just a few heads up, feel free to flame me about them anyway, but I'll just tell you.

The first Strifes and the Wallaces were made four years ago. I was ten, the writing is most likely lacking. More recently is the fourth episode, that's probably a bit better, but it's only a third complete.

Odditivity is a little better, it has actual paragraphs and setting descriptions (unlike S&W, which is in script form, sorry), but was still made a very long time ago. Expect a lacking story and few typos (like 'cna' instead of 'can' and 'teh' instead of 'the').

Poo Llama is made in Odditivity's form, but is very, VERY stupid. That's all I have to say.

My most recent piece of writing (not a fanfic!), I had to write for English class, I got 110/100 on it, so I guess its pretty good. It's my own version of 'The Odyssey', that was the project. UNFORTUNATELY, I can't attach it for some reason, if you know how could you please tell me? If you're going to read my stories, I'd like for you to read my best.