Untitled Rough Draft (I couldn't think of a title yet...)
I mean YOLO right?
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Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:53:23 PM(Please comment and tell me what ya think 
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My glistening tears rupture into clear glitter against the bleak background. I’m falling downwards, but I have my arm outstretched before me. My hand frantically inches forward, wanting – needing – someone to take hold of it. My jaw hangs down, lips in a screaming formation. But no sound is produced out of the larynx. I’m moving slower; glad, but now unable to breathe. Thick bubbles blow outwards from my mouth and nostrils, salt water burning my eyes. Then, it’s like a force is pushing me, faster. The bubbles come quicker, bursting up and towards the blanket of blue while I go the opposite direction into a hole of black. My skin starts to itch and burn as I move like a torpedo, right arm still hanging up in a pleading manner. It’s an endless abyss below the ocean’s surface. And I’m falling straight down into the dismal darkness.
Then, something forms in front of me, out of nowhere. Their smooth fingers brush against my blistering ones. Then, a voice becomes muffled against the rippling H2O. “Jayden, grab my hand!” I haven’t heard my name in forever. My tears come harder, but mix in with the liquid surrounding me. I try to fight this force that’s brining towards the end, and feel my shoulder popping out of socket. I clench my teeth together, and stretch for the feminine hand. I’m getting myself closer, close enough for us to clasp onto each other’s hands. With one last tug, I get my arm up and we grab tightly onto one another’s wrists. Then, I’m pulled up and it’s as though I crash through cement. Sunlight obscures my vision as I stumble forward, trying to maintain balance on unfamiliar legs. Something takes hold of my back, right between the shoulder blades. And I’m staring straight into gentle, aqua eyes. I take in a deep breath of life returning air, welcoming the oxygen with force.
The girl gasps, releasing me once she realized that we had been touching only inches apart, where our noses could have touched if I hadn’t been leaning back. I’m lost for words, or maybe in those words. Either way, I didn’t know what to say. So, slightly startled by her sudden and gorgeous appearance, I fall backwards onto the sand. The girl gives a face-breaking smile that could drown the universe in light, and giggles like a fairy having too much fun. Once again, I see that hand held out to me, and this time she places more weight to the right causing her hips to sway with grace. The girl then pulls a strand of black hair behind her rounded ears with the other hand and closes those brilliant eyes as her grin enlarges.
)My glistening tears rupture into clear glitter against the bleak background. I’m falling downwards, but I have my arm outstretched before me. My hand frantically inches forward, wanting – needing – someone to take hold of it. My jaw hangs down, lips in a screaming formation. But no sound is produced out of the larynx. I’m moving slower; glad, but now unable to breathe. Thick bubbles blow outwards from my mouth and nostrils, salt water burning my eyes. Then, it’s like a force is pushing me, faster. The bubbles come quicker, bursting up and towards the blanket of blue while I go the opposite direction into a hole of black. My skin starts to itch and burn as I move like a torpedo, right arm still hanging up in a pleading manner. It’s an endless abyss below the ocean’s surface. And I’m falling straight down into the dismal darkness.
Then, something forms in front of me, out of nowhere. Their smooth fingers brush against my blistering ones. Then, a voice becomes muffled against the rippling H2O. “Jayden, grab my hand!” I haven’t heard my name in forever. My tears come harder, but mix in with the liquid surrounding me. I try to fight this force that’s brining towards the end, and feel my shoulder popping out of socket. I clench my teeth together, and stretch for the feminine hand. I’m getting myself closer, close enough for us to clasp onto each other’s hands. With one last tug, I get my arm up and we grab tightly onto one another’s wrists. Then, I’m pulled up and it’s as though I crash through cement. Sunlight obscures my vision as I stumble forward, trying to maintain balance on unfamiliar legs. Something takes hold of my back, right between the shoulder blades. And I’m staring straight into gentle, aqua eyes. I take in a deep breath of life returning air, welcoming the oxygen with force.
The girl gasps, releasing me once she realized that we had been touching only inches apart, where our noses could have touched if I hadn’t been leaning back. I’m lost for words, or maybe in those words. Either way, I didn’t know what to say. So, slightly startled by her sudden and gorgeous appearance, I fall backwards onto the sand. The girl gives a face-breaking smile that could drown the universe in light, and giggles like a fairy having too much fun. Once again, I see that hand held out to me, and this time she places more weight to the right causing her hips to sway with grace. The girl then pulls a strand of black hair behind her rounded ears with the other hand and closes those brilliant eyes as her grin enlarges.
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